This was supposed to be funny?
Animation: Great job, not perfect, but great skills.
Art: Great, I like your style. It complimented your animation.
Sound: Good, great score. You're voice acting was decent to below average, nonetheless it was coherent.
General: I understand how your intentions were to make this a comedy. Personally I didn't laugh once. Your humor is extremely dry. None of it was par to your situations that you put your characters through. It was just lame. That is why I rated you a 4.
Maybe I'll check out your other flashes, because you have talent, but you wasted it on this. Apply yourself to your genre more. If you're not LAUGHING YOUR ASS OFF at your comedy than who will?